lemme get a rank

[aznboy]

this was from a remix of a song i wrote a while ago

All i wanna kno is were r the real rappers/
those backstreet trappers/
not them fake gun clappers//
Rap isnt all about kill ery1/
its about lettin ur feelins run//
Wen this remix iz dun/
i hope u get sumthin out of it, hun//
This is a rap to inform u/
2 not let ur raps conform 2/
the label society has given u//
All this gun talk , puttin bullets in ppls head/
is gonna get u shot cuz ur makin ppl red//
now ur mom iz cryin cuz she found u dead//
This aint doin no good/
just makin room 4 more statistics in the hood//
If we let this happen/
there aint gonna b no more ppl rappin//
They all gonna b laid out dead in evey street, theyre blood fills the sewers/
the cause: they got stuck up the middle like a skewer//
Its ok to rap about tha ups and downs i ur life/
but talkin bout shootin sum1 its gonna b taken in strife//
All this rap is is self expresion/
wen u die cuz u said u were gonna clap a person, tell them 2 play this at ur funural proccesion!//

[Ghutta]

middleweight man ur lines some are short u aint had no punches but u had some tight rhymes and it flowed well and topiced together good job

[aznboy]

admin said:

middleweight man ur lines some are short u aint had no punches but u had some tight rhymes and it flowed well and topiced together good job

I didnt try to have any punches